Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-26994964-20151128222738/@comment-2248043-20151202021949

((Skitty, this is for you. Everyone else, read the end of this giant post to the next giant post.

Getting rid of violently heroic means that she possibly won't kill others just because someone killed someone. Also, heroic means that they do good. The Heroes of Yandere Simulator immediately go towards the protagonist after they witness the protagonist connected to murder. Pinku is not heroic because she doesn't just send her film to the police or to anyone, she goes and uses murder as a solution. My characters are specifically made to be bad, so they're allowed to be villainous. It's their thing. I suggest you change the name to something else.

Heroes are immediate in their actions and do not kill in Yandere Simulator. Also, why does Pinku wait anyways? What's the point of that? Pinku can just murder Minori right then and there. The rooftop on Mai's side is usually empty. It's the perfect time for murder. What makes Pinku do what she does? Can you explain it through the studies humans have had about murderers and vengeance over the years? Can it be a bit obviously fictional, but acceptable?

She still doesn't have a class.

If she's Mai's BFF where has Pinku been all this time? Why does Pinku stalk instead of hanging out? Why was this never shown? Why was she suddenly stalking instead of hanging out when Mai died? When a character is in a story and is described by the author as some trait or does some sort of thing, it should actually be shown. Minori studies all the time. She used to hang out alone in the first few days and tutored people occasionally. Nadia compliments others all the time and one of the first things she did when she got to Akademi was be friendly and happy. Both have done some dangerous things and have acted evil, like lying.

I get that characters can evolve over the course of the story, and that your original vision of them just isn't the same, but from the start your character was wrong. She isn't heroic. She isn't bubbly and sweet because we have never heard of that. She is not BFFs with Mai.

If the cameras are gone, like you said,

" she did do stuff with mai also she stalked mai and stayed at home plotting after mai died also she doesnot have cameras anymore i changed that check above she has a new character page ."

then how does she know about Nadia?

 Skitty, I can't respect you or your character any longer. Please leave. ))





 ((Remember guys, it's right after Ren and Ran got scolded by Budo. Budo leaves with someone and Ren and Ran stay in the office until after lunch because of how badly injured they are. Minori is up ahead at 1:15 PM or so at lunch. Nadia gets there after going to class. Now, it's lunchtime...

 I don't think Ren will go home because that would mess up the timeline too much. Don't you think so too?))

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