Thread:Rgis/@comment-2248043-20151122203237

The summary box is too short, so I'll post my stuff here.

Changed repeated references. Made sure that the elimination methods didn't include things about what happens after the rival is killed. For example, there were bullet points about how to get rid of a corpse like through a woodchipper. That has nothing to do with the process of eliminating a rival. That's more about getting away with it. Added a new snobby rival. Deleted a reference about the snobby and delinquent rival and split it into two. Moved over some bullet points from the Trivia section to the main body of the article. Moved one bullet point to another because they were similar enough for it to work. Made sure that Senpai was linked to in every Info-box instead of just most. Made sure the wording was alright in some areas and didn't assume unnecessary things.  