Talk:Yandere-chan/@comment-29721968-20160823135607/@comment-30126387-20170901224118

Pretty good! I like her eyes. Mind if I critiqe?

Ok, so her face is good! I jsut feel that the mouth looks a bit small, so maybe make it bigger? Second off, the hands. I know they're a pain to draw because multiple people including myself, have experrienced this. Usually what I would do is draw some hands to improve and look at some references. Ayano also looks like a child. I don't know if this was intencional, but if it wasn't I think you should make her taller so she looks more like a tennager.

Overall, It's really good! Good job! =👍 =