Thread:Hypixeloponent/@comment-2248043-20151206221037

Here's what's wrong.

That fact was already said under the Paranoia section.

Repeated Trivia point.

No real proof other than Kuu Dere's position.

No proof.

No proof.

Repeated fact.

Let's see here... Don't use the word "you" in a professional article, state that Kokona is a test rival, and the part added was unnecessary. It's already heavily implied that if she's a slave, she can kill the current test rival. She also doesn't have to kill if you just don't give a weapon to her or if Kokona is already dead.

Next time, always make sure that the article doesn't have the fact you want to add. If there's no fact, add the fact with a reference. Here is the reference format:

Put that format in Source Mode after the sentence that needs to be cited. 