Thread:Jackboog21/@comment-27229742-20151005064245

I've noticed that under the section, "Welcome to Yandere Simulator Wiki!" on the front page it is not linked properly. I wanted to relink the whole thing for you, but as you already know (and I now know) I can't edit the page. There's also some weird organization going on in there, but not too glaringly bad. The game implies that you have to hurt others to fulfill your goal, but that isn't true. I understand that you must be busy, so I did it for you! Even if when you edit my post to copy my work (I figured that would be the case, it's better than just copying it from the published text, I think?) and it doesn't come out the same way it would on a regular page I think this might help guide you a little. So here is my revision of that particular section of the front page, without the quotation marks.

"Yandere Simulator is (currently) a sandbox debug build for a game in development by YandereDev.

Have you ever wanted to murder, fake suicide, or kidnap someone for your love life? If you say yes, then this is the perfect game for you!

You are an emotionless high school girl, presently called "Yandere-chan", who secretly sabotages your Senpai's love life from the shadows. Once every ten weeks a new rival will confess her love to him (or her) at Friday evening. You have to eliminate each specific rival during each of their respective weeks before they confess to make sure that no one will get in your way.

Still, you must be very careful so that Senpai doesn't notice you! When he or she sees you doing something suspicious you will never be forgiven and will get an immediate Game Over. If the time is ready, and all girls are eliminated, and you have good reputation Yandere-chan will confess her love. Remember that you must do whatever it takes to achieve your goal. Nothing else matters. No one else matters. Senpai will be yours.

Senpai doesn't have a choice.

If you want to keep up with the updateand news about Yandere Simulator, check out: YandereDev (Developer)'s Blog! Have fun!"

I know I put quotation marks in quotation marks, but the very first and last pairs won't be in the final post, so...

Anyways, as you can see the page is a little less repetitive (it said Senpai a bit much), has correct linking, and is very clear. For example, the original text didn't specify that each rival had their own week. I've fixed that so that it implies that you can only eliminate rivals within their own week, just like in the game! It also doesn't disrupt the flow of the words, so I thought adding it in would be okay and wouldn't make it digress too much.

I also got rid of that last tidbit at the end, after the post talks about the blog. Do we really need to have sanity information come after the conclusion? I think someone just put it there and wanted to change it later but forgot. Whatever the case I fixed it. I understand that knowing about how your sanity will affect your kills is important, but that isn't quite close to the main point of the game (although it gets there) and it's already described on it's own page. Trust me, I checked.

So even if you can't move over the links from here over to the front page properly because maybe the front page editing system is a bit different from this one for some reason, and that does happen, I think I've made myself pretty clear. 