Talk:Osana Najimi/@comment-30033404-20171129055214/@comment-35144320-20180531024229

Looks very nice, just a few tips:

She looks like she's wearing headbands. Maybe you could make them look a little more like scruchies and add the polka dots?

Can you try to add the small bow?

The collar is a bit too small, maybe you could make it a more accurate size? That would look nicer.

The hands look a little bit like feet (no offense, hands are difficult!) Maybe try drawing another finger and maybe making it curved but not so round.

Overall nice attempt. It is very cute and very well signifies her tsundere nature. I hope this helps. :)