Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-26994964-20151128222738/@comment-25990213-20151202011759

Rgis wrote: Ticci Toby CP wrote: ((I'm confused is Minori dead or alive because Pinku is a Mary Sue?)) Skitty, please stop.
 * Here's how to test your character.
 * How does your character know where Minori lives?
 * How does she have cameras everywhere? Info-chan's reason will be explained in a cassette tape. You have given no reason.
 * Your character is overpowered. The people in this thread are cool not because of just somehow finding a person's house by killing them, but keeping themselves on their toes and at least trying to reason things out. They battle legitimately and don't need to resort to Sues. I'm sorry, but I think that if you didn't just give her a flaw that only helps the good characters then it would be a bit better.
 * You skipped to 9 PM. Now that I know what you're going to do, I'll stop you. Never skip ahead like that unless you want to reveal your plans. I skip ahead short distances, like sessions or breaks.
 * Why didn't she do anything before Mai died?
 * Inkyu Basu isn't a confirmed vampire.
 * She eats Minori's heart. She's probably going to get sick so that she can't come to school and Nadia can do a bunch of cool crap.
 * How is Info-chan not going after Pinku? How did Pinku avoid any of Info-chan's attacks?
 * Even if she's not a Sue she's still a bad character. She took down a tough enemy for everyone else in one go. No strategies and no plans. No quick thinking, just somehow finding her house.
 * You didn't give a class for her.

Remember, Pinku shouldn't know that Minori and Nadia are deadly. There's no way Akademi would let cameras on school grounds like that. she just is mai waifu's stalker so she saw mai die and hid (she is very used to death) im making her less overpowered