User blog:Jeon Ra Neul/What's Wrong With This Story?

I'm just randomly making stuff up cuz I'm bored.. Anyways, what is wrong with this story?

It was dusk. The sun was up and the birds were chirping. That morning, I woke up and immediately went to school. I was full since breakfast tasted good at home. I then rushed to my class because I was gonna get late. School started at 8 PM. I went into my class and stood on my chair. I grabbed my backpack and grabbed what I needed. I then started the day...

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