Thread:Rgis/@comment-2248043-20160116070922

This is my summary for my edit on the Homicide page.

A lot of stuff wasn't needed there. The pictures in the gallery were outdated and most were about Teacher's Pets, corpses, etc. This page is about Homicide, which relates but doesn't need all of that.

I updated some other pictures, which took a while since some were surprisingly tricky.

I tried to make the rest of the article not overlink nor underlink. I got rid of some useless information under the Framing section as well because it's bad to elaborate on another article when only a small summary is needed. I tried my best to make it better, since it is an article, but it took me hours to do this because I kept getting side-tracked by some other things, like finding a new volunteer when I was listening to Druelbozo's stream as I edited this and another page. I had to keep updated on the Wiki Activity and my Twitter account as well.

I decided to link the names of the headings with Personas because I considered that a list. It just looks better, anyways. I'm not too sure about this, even if the headings were already linked before I got there.

There was this one really tricky paragraph with something about "In future updates, as sanity drops, killing animations take longer..." and stuff. I got one new citation from a recent video, since it's good to update information. I found the original conversation thread the paragraph was referring to, and put that in because one fact did not have a proper citation. The fact about the students and their phones was more tricky but I just added two refs for it.

I added a fact that if Kokona is murdered the day after there will be a flower placed on her desk. I have encountered this several times, so I know it's true.

I bolded some of the sub-headings. The page is so cute now, especially with the new pictures. 