Talk:SNAP/@comment-26258959-20150908221936/@comment-27229742-20150922021720

Uh... That wasn't very good. Senpai was a bit of a nice guy pushover in the first intro, but at the second intro it's not even suggested. Therefore, I don't think Senpai would do that. If he gets creeped out by a girl standing around him for too long wouldn't he be a bit weirded out by the fact that a random girl who he never talks to commits suicide just because he has a girlfriend? Senpai kind of seems like a jerk just because he's turning away yet another girl who likes him (Kokona) just because a crazy girl with a teenage crush died for him. It's not like she sacrificed herself to him, no it's like she just gave up because it was too hard for her. I would feel more bad for Yandere-chan if she wasn't such a sociopath. Senpai doesn't know this, but wouldn't he still feel that this girl is kind of obsessive? Really obsessive? Senpai can clearly see from the note and Yandere-chan's actions that Yandere-chan will ruin Kokona's life just because Kokona was wrong to have feelings. It's not like Kokona is made out to be mean in the game or the fanfic, no she was just a completely normal girl with an abused life who finally, FINALLY got the guy she wanted. After all the pain in her life, namely her mom dying, her dad abusing her, her compensated dating, after all that Kokona finally gets thrown a bone because she gets to date who she likes. Then, just because she liked the wrong guy and caused a problem she didn't even know about, she gets hurt. Her boyfriend rejects her. May I also mention that Yandere-chan pointed out in her note that she attacked Osana? It doesn't matter if she's sorry for it. Yandere-chan did a bad thing. You may be thinking, "But I wrote 'attacked' and not 'killed'! It's not that bad!" Think of the ways you can get rid of rivals in this game. Knocking them out and keeping them in your basement and brainwashing them, electrocuting them, regularly murdering them, drowning them, poisoning them, making them commit suicide, ruining their reputation but not enough for them to commit suicide, and matchmaking them. Clearly, if Yandere-chan said she attacked Osana, and there are no ways planned or currently in the game for you to specifically attack someone without doing serious damage to them then that means Yandere-chan did something absolutely terrible just because of her stupid crush. And don't call it love. Is Senpai really okay with that? Maybe, just maybe Yandere-chan got rid of Osana by attacking her verbally and spread rumors about her so that Osana's reputation would be ruined. So I can understand if Senpai hated Osana after that, but the thing is the note completely implies that Yandere-chan was the cause of Osana's rumors. So wouldn't Senpai believe that it wasn't Osana's fault? Wouldn't Senpai be just a little bit mad that Yandere-chan got rid of one of his most long lasting friends? Think about it. The dev said that Senpai won't have many friends at the beginning of the game, but over the course of 10 weeks there will be more girls that will like him, thus making him popular. Wouldn't he really care for the girl who he has known for the longest time? Would he really brush off that fact that some obsessive girl came out of nowhere and ruined her life? Even if Senpai didn't care for Osana, wouldn't he be mad that Yandere-chan is trying to ruin his love life? Yeah, even if Senpai believes that Osana is bad, Yandere-chan got rid of Osana for the wrong reasons. It's like a guy who helps someone out just to get points for a bet. That's not right! It's not okay! What Yandere-chan feels is not love! In the second intro, Yandere-chan never talks about what she likes about Senpai. Like, his personality, I mean. Yandere-chan just talks about how she loves how he makes her feel. So she's just in love with love. If you believe, "Oh! Well it was implied that she liked Senpai for his personality!" No. If she really cared about him she wouldn't have attacked anyone, anyone at all for any reason. People who are in love, even people who aren't in love or just love platonically make sure that the person they care about is happy, even without them. So you're telling me that if a girl tried to destroy your love life and then said she would haunt your girlfriend forever you wouldn't think she's selfish at all? Sorry, I know this comes off as a little, harsh... But it's just that what Yandere-chan did was clearly selfish. It doesn't matter how you feel about someone. What matters is that the someone you care about is okay. Accept defeat with grace. You can't just act so immaturely and then try and hurt other people just because you can't get over your feelings. That's just not right.

Also, Kokona is a test rival. I just wanted to point that out, just in case you didn't know, but you probably did. I also think that it'd be better if Osana was the girlfriend, since Osana is an actual known and officially confirmed rival. Or you could've just stated it as any rival, or just "The Rival" or something like that.

Another thing! What would be the point of Spook Mode? If Senpai already knows about your feelings and apparently, for some... very odd reason understands your feelings, then he would more likely focus on you! I mean, you JUST confessed to him! You just died right in public for him! If Senpai cares so much then he should probably push away these other girls in favor of Yandere-chan! I also don't get the part where you have to get the girl who "stole" Senpai from you. Isn't she already out of the way? How will she ever recover from the fact that everyone in school now hates her? It's implied that they do from Senpai's actions, the fact that no one calls Yandere-chan out on what she did, and also the fact that everyone hangs their head in shame because of what happened. No one cares for Kokona. No one. Not even Saki Miyu, who normally would. I've gotta say, that's a bit out of character.

Speaking of characters, how could there be a unanimous agreement that what Yandere-chan did was right? Did no one think that she went too far? Do you think that's what you're supposed to do in love? Kill yourself when the other person is happy with someone else? Did no one catch onto the fact that Yandere-chan is an obsessive, clingy maniac? Suicide is never the answer! Never! Are you implying that it is? Are you implying that the students and faculty think that this is right? Or what, do they not speak ill of the dead?

From a gameplay standpoint this also doesn't work. I already pointed out the fact that there's no point for Yandere-chan to be posessive anymore. Even if there is, because she's still a yandere, then Senpai should push away other girls like he did to Kokona just for Yandere-chan. Why wouldn't he? Oh, he pushes away Kokona, his girlfriend but not random other girls? I know Kokona's a butt monkey and all but this makes no sense. That writing is totally out of character! At least, the Senpai you're making, because we don't know if Senpai will be this... odd in the real full game. Anyway, another way this from a gameplay standpoint won't work is that you'll never be able to actually be with Senpai. In nowhere in your story did you mention that you will try to get a physical body like the Phantom Girl will try to do in the Halloween DLC. Also, if this was the SNAP ending where you can apparently play forever (again, you never implied that you'll get a physical body so that you can be with Senpai forever, so this is basically endless mode. You never suggested an ending to this mode) which, I must remind you that there's already an Endless mode planned, separate from the Story Mode. So this mode is basically just Endless mode but with you as a ghost.

Also, you said, "You can then follow Senpai around for the rest of the week". Why just a week? Why make it a week? That makes no sense. You never gave any reason for it to be a week.

I think you all are just making Yandere-chan out to be this fallen hero with was in love but lived a hard life. No she didn't. She's a terrible person who attacked an innocent girl, Osana, as seen from the text, and Kokona, just because she didn't get what she wanted. Does no one else think that Kokona is a very decent individual? Should we just hate on her just because she's a rival? I'll get rid of the rivals if I play the game, but I won't just hate them just because they're against me. Being against me and being a bad person are two different things. It's like in Future Diary. Just because all those characters are working against Yukiteru and Yuno means that they're bad? To be honest some of them were better individuals then at least Yuno and maybe Yukiteru. For example, Marco and Ai. They had true love for each other. They fought together and protected one another. They stayed with each other until the end. The eighth was a completely benevolent and incredible person. Sure, she looked weird but appearances don't matter. Think of all the children she helped out with her orphanage! Think of how many people wanted her as a goddess because she was such a great person! Admittedly, not all the opponents against Yukiteru and Yuno were good people but what I'm saying is that just because someone's against you doesn't mean they're bad people and their lives deserved to be bended and broken in a way that makes you feel good.

Contact me if you reply to my comment because this thing you came up with is interesting, even if I don't agree with it. I don't hate you, but I just want to see more from your point of view. If anyone wants to talk more about this then go ahead and contact me too. I'm sorry if I seemed a little rude. I just like talking about this game. I get really excited about debating and such, which is why I took this so seriously. Sorry.